Sunday, August 12, 2007

Soap Opera Sunday: Betrayal (Revised. Thanks to M.)

Her confession came with the asparagus crepes,
accompanied by candlelight
and rather a lot of sweet white wine:
She was seeing Paul, she said.
My guy.

Of course I understood, I said.
Things with Paul had been over for quite some time.
Our visits infrequent; letters cold.
(Just how long, though, came as a bit of a surprise.)

And then, as she noted,
there hadn't been all so much between me and him, anyway.
(Only hopes; desire; too much confusion.)

We drank more wine, ate her chocolate cake.
Told stories, shared plans, laughed a lot.
I wished her well.

And then we parted,
From thenceforth friendly,
Never again, though, friends.
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11 comments:

Jen said...

I like the poetic SOS's you're posting, though... and these are great snapshots. Dinners like that are never happy, though.

Fourier Analyst said...

Love the food metaphors! You are so creative! Yay SOS!! (And thanks for your sweet comments on my SOS!)

Goofball said...

Wow, so cool that you can post a poetic SOS!
I can feel the pain from the dinner...both from the betrayal reveales as well as from the asparagus crepes. Yuck.

Luisa Perkins said...

NICE ending.

Now I want some crepes. ;)

Dedee said...

I love the poetry! How were the aspargus crepes? Sounds ymmmy!

Jen said...

I love the revisions - this is so much stronger now! I liked the first version a lot, but I thought it was a break-up, not a confessional dinner... Great stuff.

jennifer said...

I'm hungry again...

cathouse teri said...

Purrrrrfectly stated!

It is never good to go for a friend's ex.

anno said...

Thanks everyone! And apologies to anyone who saw this before I revised it. That is after M. explained that I was on the wrong side of that very fine line dividing cryptic from comprehensible.

And Cathouse Teri: You are absolutely right - everybody loses. It sucks.

Jenn in Holland said...

Brilliant!
Always brilliant, anno.

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